AUTHOR IN PROGRESS

What I think I did good in my Emerson writing was the using the structure and rules when writing an essay. I believe my context was pretty decent and I wrote what the prom asked me to. One commentary my teacher gave me was that my essay was good, and I wrote in the structure that all of my teachers in the past had been taught me. However he told me that I should add more who I am in my writing and express my self, that way I could give my writing more like a personal sound and not like a school related. Also I need to improve on how support my points, using evidence like quotes from Emerson's essay, or personal experience.

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